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Author Topic: [TLOK] Book 5 : Humanity - Mixed- [PG-13] [Updated 9-5-15]  (Read 7129 times)
Freedom153
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« Reply #50 on: Jul 17, 2015 09:48 pm »

Chapter 56 finished, edited and posted.

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10944213/56/Book-5-Humanity

Chapter 56: A Model Citizen: Part 1: Continuing the positive life review she had begun after temporarily dealing with her feelings of nihilism, still unsure why a particular ancient face-stealing spirit showed fleeting interest in her in the first place, ordinary citizen Ursa continues her personal journey - finding clouded vision and low self-worth had blocked her from appreciating all she's done in her life, even glimpsing her mysterious past one...
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First eyes, a treasure. New eyes, end with a pretentious blink, own vision eclipses.
Book 5:Humanity, aka: Freedom's First Writ
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« Reply #51 on: Aug 10, 2015 09:37 pm »

Chapter 57 Finished, Chapter 58 finished, both posted.


https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10944213/57/Book-5-Humanity
Chapter 57: A Model Citizen: Part 2:
Getting out of her apartment complex, but not before helping an old acquaintance and getting to know a neighbor she had ignored better, Ursa finds herself swept up in "big events" - left wondering if "doing important things" will help or hinder her growth, doubts and nasty thoughts not going away easily.
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10944213/58/Book-5-Humanity
Chapter 57: A Model Citizen: Part 3:
After making a disturbing discovery, concerns about herself temporarily go by the wayside. Unknown to anyone but themselves and the spirits that follow them, Long Yumao and his ally Koh plot within the Spirit World, seeking to strengthen their power in any way they can, still trapped within the Avatar's barriers blocking exit into the Physical World on the accursed human's side.
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First eyes, a treasure. New eyes, end with a pretentious blink, own vision eclipses.
Book 5:Humanity, aka: Freedom's First Writ
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« Reply #52 on: Sep 05, 2015 08:17 pm »

Chapter 59 Finished (FINALLY), see FF.net explanation - "Due to real life heating up, chapters will definitely be shorter, and likely more infrequent."

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10944213/59/Book-5-Humanity
Chapter 59: The Camp: Solid Foundations
Jasmine gets to know her camp's inhabitant a bit better, human and spirit alike, and makes an important find on the train her "on-loan" spirit allies helped hijack the previous night.

Unseen by anyone on the Avatar's side, in the Earth Empire camp, Chin's daughter Jayashri finds more to someone she thought shallow - both personally, and tactically.
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Additional datapoints acquired. Additional animated stories viewed. Directive: adjust opinion... adjusting...
First eyes, a treasure. New eyes, end with a pretentious blink, own vision eclipses.
Book 5:Humanity, aka: Freedom's First Writ
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