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Author Topic: Book 3: Raging Flame (Rated T) (29/33) (Updated 19/10/2014)  (Read 11979 times)
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« on: Jul 13, 2013 07:51 pm »



Korra is reeling after the devastation inflicted upon Republic City and the harm her friends have gone through. She needs to protect them, and herself from the many enemies revealing themselves. And as the world starts to unravel and tensions rise amid the nations, she'll learn the true meaning of what it is to be the Avatar. (Criticism welcome) Book 3 of 4 of Changing Elements.

So here is the next installment in my little series.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9487393/1/Book-3-Raging-Flame

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« Reply #1 on: Jul 19, 2013 11:27 am »

Chapter 2, fellas and ladies.

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« Reply #2 on: Jul 23, 2013 09:58 am »

Chapter 3, guys.

Here it is. http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9487393/3/
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« Reply #3 on: Jul 28, 2013 03:14 am »

Number 4. Unlucky for a reason.

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« Reply #4 on: Aug 04, 2013 08:56 am »

And here's.... Chapter 5!

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« Reply #5 on: Aug 12, 2013 12:10 am »

Chapter 6, guys and gals.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9487393/6/Book-3-Raging-Flame
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« Reply #6 on: Aug 15, 2013 07:51 am »

Chapter SUH-VEN.

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« Reply #7 on: Aug 21, 2013 10:35 am »

Numbuh ate.

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« Reply #8 on: Aug 29, 2013 01:52 am »

Whoops. Kinda forgot to mention that Chapter Nine is now out.

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« Reply #9 on: Sep 03, 2013 10:29 pm »

Numbuh 10, reporting for duty. And that marks the first third of Raging Flame, yay!

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« Reply #10 on: Sep 08, 2013 11:06 pm »

Here's 11, guys.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9487393/11/Book-3-Raging-Flame

there's something I need to say.

I think this is a good place to stop the story for a while and focus on getting my bearings. The story has suffered because of it. I've been getting too many ideas, trying to implement at the same time, and just making a absolute mess of things in my opinion. I haven't even done a read-through of the series up to this point.

That doesn't mean there won't be another 10 day wait for a chapter. What it means is that I'm just going to be taking a little time off to step away from the series, read it to myself, and go from there. I do have a clear outline of how this story and the final one will end, I just need to work on the events getting us there. And seeing as the Book 2 premiere is just around the corner, I think all of us would rather go watch that anyway.

So, yeah. Please review and criticize folks, it really does go far.
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« Reply #11 on: Sep 23, 2013 09:02 am »

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9487393/12/Book-3-Raging-Flame

Okay, that might have seemed like it was 10 days+, but you were just imagining it. Sorry for the wait, I kind of took the opportunity to go back and add in some things I was really meaning to get onto, mainly small bits and pieces about Sensha and Boto to make things a little clearer with them.

But I also made a fairly big change. After watching the absolutely fantastic past few episodes, I had to do something involving a little bit of conflict between Tonraq and Unalaq, and revamped the appearance of the glacier to match the canon version. Mainly because I feel it just reads much better that way. So those are the new additions, and here's the new chapter. Sorry for the wait on this one, but this is where the rest of the story kicks off from.

I think this was well worth the wait.
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« Reply #12 on: Sep 30, 2013 07:34 am »

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Next one, is up and about, folks! Presenting the Fire Nation and Fire Lord, old and new, and the pro-bending arena!
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« Reply #13 on: Oct 08, 2013 11:02 pm »

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9487393/14/Book-3-Raging-Flame

So, turns out Agni Kai literally means 'Fire Meeting'. Think that applies for this chapter.
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« Reply #14 on: Oct 19, 2013 04:00 am »

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9487393/15/Book-3-Raging-Flame

So this chapter is a primer for the next couple, being that, it may seem fairly short.
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« Reply #15 on: Oct 27, 2013 10:53 am »

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9487393/1/Book-3-Raging-Flame

Yeps. Pretty big stuff this chapter. Oh, and the spirits from Beginnings put in a appearance.
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« Reply #16 on: Nov 09, 2013 01:34 am »

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'Nuther one. Bloody fantastic if I say so myself. Have a squiz.
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« Reply #17 on: Nov 19, 2013 06:41 am »

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9487393/1/Book-3-Raging-Flame

This one is huge by the way. It sets up a lot of stuff and also brings a end to some as well.
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« Reply #18 on: Nov 28, 2013 08:36 am »

Chapter 19. Once again. A lot of stuff gets done this chapter. And some very huge ones are still coming.

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9487393/19/Book-3-Raging-Flame
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« Reply #19 on: Dec 03, 2013 07:25 am »

Just curious about something: how does the firearm that Hiroshi Sato and the Equalists are manufacturing work, exactly? I ask because I'm in the process of working out the details of a LoK fanfic set in the future, and am thinking of concepts for new weapons.
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« Reply #20 on: Dec 03, 2013 10:30 pm »

Sorry, I couldn't copy over the stuff in my PM.

Basically Hiroshi's revolver works along the same lines as real-life revolvers. If he had developed in our world, there wouldn't be anything mechanically different to it when compared to other revolver designs.

However, in that world, his revolver can become the most deadliest weapon developed.

Apart from that it is also coated in a thin layer of platinum to proof it against metalbending.

Off-topic, how are you liking the stories so far?
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« Reply #21 on: Dec 06, 2013 11:16 pm »

Chapter 20, guys. Everyone's back together!.... for a few moments, anyway.

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« Reply #22 on: Dec 20, 2013 07:54 pm »

Chapter 21! Where everybody splits up for a while! Yay!

The next few chapters will focus almost solely on the events at the Eastern Air Temple, before going back to Republic City.

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9487393/21/Book-3-Raging-Flame
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« Reply #23 on: Dec 30, 2013 10:23 am »

22! Spirit world visit time! This chapter and the next will focus exclusively on Korra and the others at the Eastern Air Temple. But Republic City will be back soon!

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9487393/22/Book-3-Raging-Flame
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« Reply #24 on: Jan 10, 2014 09:09 pm »

23! More spirit world time stuff! Korra gets lost in a forest! Has picnic! Goes on spirit vision! Tai and Jinora meet a very grouchy owl! Touch books! Nearly get eaten!

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