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Chapter Seven - On Hold.Book Four: Rewrites and Edits - (Updated 12-12-08) - Based on suggestions, responses, and conversations here on ASN, I am changing chapters 1-6 before posting them on dA and ff.net. I will keep a list of what has been changed here, but I recommend everyone checks them out! There are extended scenes, extra scenes, and some chapters will be completely transformed, though the end results of the 1-6 Arc will remain the same.
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His crutch made a light tapping noise against the stone street as Sokka made his way home to Team Avatar's permanent Ba Sing Se accommodations. After Zuko's coronation, the group had come to visit the newly liberated city. Officially, they were there to open up political ties between the Earth Kingdom and the Fire Nation. Unofficially, they were there to relax and enjoy Iroh's recently reopened tea shop, the Jasmine Dragon.
Sokka didn't claim to know much about tea, but thoughts of a hot bath and a hot cup of Iroh's finest were the only things keeping him on his feet. He stifled a yawn and caught a friendly yet totally unexpected pat on the shoulder that nearly sent him toppling, unbalanced as he was with one good leg and a single crutch.
"Sorry." Zuko's voice was rough with apology and Sokka couldn't help but find it strange to hear something like compassion coming from his old enemy.
"It's fine," Sokka assured him, regaining his balance. "I'm just tired." Tired was an understatement, but Sokka wasn't about to voice his complaints of the day.
"Me too," Zuko agreed, and something in his tone implied he knew exactly how Sokka was feeling. A semi-awkward silence ensued as the two continued on their way. Zuko cleared his throat. "You did good work back there today."
"Compliments and apologies?" Sokka teased. "Who are you and what did you do with the old Fire Lord?"
"Ha ha," Zuko replied dryly.
Zuko was still new to the wide worlds of sarcasm and humor and Sokka considered it his duty to educate him. "Hey, y'know, don't be afraid to really laugh when something's funny. That was a good joke."
Zuko eyed him skeptically. "It was?"
"Sure." Sokka shifted his grip on his crutch so he could count off the finer points of comedy on his fingers. "It had perfect timing, perfect execution, perfect inflection, and if you consider the circumstances, what with you being the NEW Fire Lord and your dad being all evil and-" His crutch struck the edge of a slightly raised block in the path and before Zuko could catch him, he face planted into the street.
Zuko's burst of laughter was genuine but Sokka wasn't about to congratulate him on a lesson learned.
"Stupid rock!" Sokka kicked back at the offending stone before thinking about it and spent the next thirty seconds rolling on his back, gripping his leg and trying to keep his eyes from watering from the pain. "Ow ow ow, stupid stupid rock. Stupid city full of stupid rocks!"
"Well this is the Earth Kingdom," Zuko laughed. "What do you expect?"
"I expect a little gratitude!" Sokka sat up slowly and held his leg to his chest protectively. "I saved your life, rocks!" He glowered and pointed accusingly at the stones. "If it weren't for me you'd be ash right now."
"I'm sure they're very grateful." Zuko held out his hand. "Can we go now before anyone sees a respected war hero and the Fire Lord acting like a couple of crazy kids?"
"That probably wouldn't help our negotiations with the Peace Council," Sokka agreed reluctantly, souring at the thought of pompous nobles and ridiculous demands. He sighed and straightened his leg, wincing as he recalled the events of the day.
"Maybe you should have your sister take a look at it... She really helped with my wounds."
"My leg's healing fine," Sokka informed him curtly. "I could go without the crutch right now if I wanted, but that's not what's on my mind." He leaned back, staring up at the cloudless night sky. The moon was a mere crescent, its light casting a soft glow over the sprawling city. "I messed up today, didn't I?"
Zuko stared up at the moon to avoid making eye-contact, his mouth set in a thin line.
Sokka frowned. "I knew it."
Zuko sighed and sat down in the street, facing him. The moonlight gleamed against the white of his skin, contrasting starkly with the darkness of his scar. "Not everyone was born to be a diplomat. Maybe you should consider yourself lucky?"
"I could whip up a battle plan in five minutes, but ask me to help negotiate peace and I flop. What does that say about me?"
"Hey, my first council meeting wasn't exactly a success." Zuko pointed to his scar. "It takes time."
"No... I don't think so. My whole life I've thought about pretty much three things; food, girls and defeating the Fire Nation. No offense."
Zuko shrugged, "How do you think I feel? I'm answering for the crimes of my father and my father's father, and his father before him; one hundred years of cruelty and tyranny..." He stood up and pretended to address the Peace Council. "Hello. Fire Lord Zuko here. Sorry about the mess."
Sokka snorted appreciatively. "Yeah, that's rough buddy."
"No matter what I say or do, it's not enough to please everyone."
"Well at least you didn't suggest that the upper houses of the Earth Kingdom donate half their wealth to rebuilding..."
They both cringed.
"Yeah, that did not go over well. You might as well have suggested they give up their rights and titles and become normal citizens."
"I was going to," Sokka grumbled. "It's not like it would be such a bad thing. All the division between people is what started the war in the first place. And now we sit around all day arguing about who's got it the worst, and the worst part is, the people who really got hurt by the war don't have anyone there to stand up for them."
"Not true," Zuko said. "They've got us."
"Well, talking isn't getting us anywhere."
Zuko smirked at the irony and held out his hand. "C'mon."
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Katara and Suki didn't look up from their game of Pai Sho when Zuko and Sokka returned. Toph was sprawled on the floor with Momo curled up on top of her, both fast asleep.
"Welcome back," Katara said off-handedly, contemplating her next move. Suki had her on the defensive, but she wasn't planning on going down without a fight.
Zuko hung up their councilor robes and leaned Sokka's crutch against the wall while Sokka grunted in reply and limped past their table. Suki watched him go by. "No crutch, tough guy?"
Sokka went to the crude drawing he'd pinned to the wall to commemorate their happy memories of victory. He took it down, crumpling it. Katara tore herself from the game and gave her brother a look of dry amusement. "Well hello there, Mr. Grumpy Pants. Haven't seen you in a while, how you been?"
Toph stirred, upsetting Momo's position. The flying lemur jumped on the table, scattering Suki's captured Pai Sho tiles.
Sokka glared as he continued crumpling his drawing. "You know that euphoria we've all been feeling since Aang defeated Ozai?"
"Yeah?"
"Mine's gone now."
"Aww." Suki made a game winning move and then gave her undivided attention. "Did something happen?"
"I don't wanna talk about it."
Zuko came over, removing his Fire Lord clip and shaking his hair loose. "He just made a fool of himself in front of the leaders of the free world, no biggie."
Sokka threw up his arms in disgust. "This was all fun at first!"
Katara raised an eyebrow. "You mean when they were holding banquets in our honor every night?"
"Well, yeah..."
Katara rolled her eyes.
Sokka made a dismissive gesture with his hands. "Whatever. Where's Aang? 'Cuz I'm saddling up Appa and yip yipping outta here tonight. You with me, Momo?" Momo jumped on his head, curling his tail around it like a fuzzy crown.
Katara sighed, used to her brother's antics. "Sokka, relax. You're tired and cranky. Everything will look better in the morning."
"I'm not cranky!"
A gust of wind heralded the arrival of the single most powerful person in the world. An orange blur spiraled through the window and rolled to his feet, staff in hand. Aang tossed off his ceremonial Avatar robes and blew them away with airbending, stripping down to his usual outfit.
Toph yawned. "Nice entrance, Twinkle Toes."
"Gah! I'm sick of Ba Sing Se!" If Aang had hair, he would have been pulling it in frustration. "Really really sick of it."
Sokka couldn't help but notice Katara's look of genuine concern. She caught Aang's robes before they hit the floor. "What happened, Aang?"
"It's what's NOT happening that's irritating me!"
Sokka rounded on his sister. "See? Even Aang agrees with me."
"Hush Sokka, this is different. Aang probably has good reason to feel the way he does."
"I have good reasons," Sokka replied defensively, "just because I didn't share them."
Aang turned to face the young water tribe warrior. "Sokka... I heard what happened today at the Peace Council."
Sokka gulped, "I can explain..."
"You don't need to. I agree with you. The upper houses of Ba Sing Se are being unreasonable. There are hundreds and thousands of refugees in the city who want to go home and rebuild their old lives, but the Peace Council is more concerned with deciding who's going to pay for repairs to the Earth King's Palace. Which is ridiculous since the Earth King is still missing and nobody can even decide who's supposed to be in charge!" Aang finished his rant, huffing. He took a deep calming breath and straightened up. "We're wasting our time here." He turned away from his friends and looked out the window, adding in a slightly softer voice, "I'M wasting my time here."
Katara went toward him but before she could think of something encouraging to say, Aang jumped in surprise and slid behind her, using her body as a shield.
"Aang, what the...?"
The door opened before she could finish her question. Former liaison and one time bureaucratic leader of Occupied Ba Sing Se, Joo Dee, stepped into their living quarters unannounced and uninvited. Her smile was still the same, even though Long Feng's brainwashing had been largely undone. "Avatar Aang," she addressed Katara, easily spotting the slightly smaller figure of the young monk. "You left so suddenly; we had to postpone the meeting until the morning."
Aang stepped out to face the order-crazed woman. "I'm not going back to your meetings. In fact, we've decided to leave Ba Sing Se." Aang glanced at Katara and when she didn't object he added, "Tomorrow, first light."
Toph sat up, fully awake. "We're leaving? Excellent!"
Sokka put his arm around Suki, grinning smugly and tossing a thumbs-up to Zuko who leaned back against the wall, watching in contemplative silence. Momo jumped from Sokka to Aang, excited.
"You mustn't!" Joo Dee was shocked. "We've been planning the Festival in your honor. It would be a great disservice to the Peace Council and the Upper Houses of Ba Sing Se if you were to leave."
"I'm sure you'll think of something appropriate to say to them," Sokka joked.
"But you don't understand. This Festival was to commemorate not only the end of the war, but also the rise of the world's newest young leaders."
"We get it." Toph dug in her ear, flicking away a piece of ear wax. "You want to throw us more parties. It's flattering, but there are better uses for our time."
Joo Dee sighed, "I was supposed to keep this a secret until the Festival, but you leave me no choice. You see, by popular vote of the Peace Council and the Upper Houses, each of you is to be given a title more befitting your status as Heroes of the New World."
Sokka raised an eyebrow. "Titles? Last I checked, it was you people who keep reminding Katara and I that we're just 'water tribe peasants'."
"That's exactly the point!" Joo Dee gained momentum and her smile broadened. "Your father has been recognized by the Council as Chieftain of the Southern Water Tribe."
Sokka shrugged, "Dad's always been the chief. It's pretty much an honorary title."
"But don't you see? Like the Northern Water Tribe, your tribe will be officially recognized by the other nations. Rule of the South will be passed down your family line for all time."
"Wait," Katara shot a look at her brother, seeing her surprise mirrored on his face. "Are you saying... Sokka and I are going to be prince and princess of the Southern Water Tribe?"
"That is correct, Princess Katara." Joo Dee inclined her head respectfully. Aang's jaw dropped and the rest of the group stood dumbfounded. "Not to mention, the Bei Fong family has been granted nobility. Your parents will arrive tomorrow for the festivities, Lady Toph."
Toph sputtered, "My parents??"
Sokka recovered from his shock enough to laugh. "Lady Toph, that's a good one."
Toph glared in no particular direction. "Keep laughing, Prince Sokka. At least I had the proper upbringing to pull it off."
"Prince Sokka." Suki squeezed his waist. "I kinda like the sound of it."
Sokka set his jaw. "I don't."
Joo Dee turned to appraise him. "You've been given a great honor."
"I've been given nothing."
Joo Dee's smile didn't falter, but something in her expression cooled. "Commander Suki and the Kyoshi Warriors have been assigned the position of Honor Guard for the Peace Council. And of course, the Avatar could be given no higher honor and no higher respect than he already enjoys."
Aang snorted.
Zuko stepped forward from his place against the wall and Joo Dee turned to him slowly.
"Thank you, Administrator. We will remain in Ba Sing Se for one more day. I recommend you rush the preparations for the festival if you want us to attend." It was an obvious dismissal, but Joo Dee only smiled. Zuko narrowed his eyes, the scar tissue pulling at the left side of his face. "You're dismissed."
The woman bowed and backed out of the house, closing the door behind her silently. A collective shudder ran through the group.
"She still gives me the creeps," Sokka said, sliding his arm from around Suki's shoulders and making his way toward the Pai Sho table and the sleeping quarters beyond. He paused, glancing at the game. "Nice, Katara."
Katara sighed, "I know, it's the third game in a row I've lost to Suki."
"Not so." He smirked. "You've got her in three moves."
Suki turned her chair, straddling it and staring at the board intently. "Not possible. I've practically won."
"You wanna put your money where your mouth is,
Commander Suki?"
Suki laughed, "You're on,
your highness."
Sokka cracked his knuckles and took Katara's seat, Katara crowding close to watch the game. Zuko glanced at Aang, who seemed lost in thought, absently scratching Momo behind the ears. They both had more than enough on their minds, but Zuko had to add one more concern to his growing list. Joo Dee's behavior toward him had been even colder than usual.
The game lasted all of five minutes.
"I don't believe it." Suki blinked in disbelief, impressed in spite of herself. "You've been practicing with General Iroh, haven't you?"
Sokka leaned back in his chair, lacing his fingers behind his head. "And Master Piandao." He yawned and stretched. "Sleepy time." He got to his feet but slipped on one of Momo's scattered tiles, barely catching himself on the edge of the table.
Suki went to his side and slid under his arm. "Ok, see, that's why people with broken legs usually use some sort of support. Like the perfectly good crutch by the door."
"I've got all the support I need right here." He smiled and Suki felt her own knees go weak.
Toph gagged. "Get a room."
"Great idea, Toph." Sokka steered himself and Suki toward the sleeping quarters.
The blind Earthbender called after them, "Preferably in a different district!"
Zuko looked at Katara. "I think I just figured out why he doesn't want you to heal him."